Read the following body paragraph of an informative essay.What is wrong with the paragraph?To sum up, living at the North Pole would be very cold and uncomfortable. Since very few people live there, there would be very few people to talk to. Also, no one can grow a garden at the North Pole. People who live at the equator also experience problems. Even though Santa Claus lives at the North Pole, there are some problems people living in such a cold climate must face every day. The next time someone wants to complain about where they live, they should consider those people who have to live at the North Pole.

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A concluding paragraph or concluding section of an informative essay is similar to that of the persuasive essay. The concluding paragraph will wrap up the information in the essay. This brings the essay to a close. Likewise, a concluding statement should also bring the paragraph to a close.


Read the following body paragraph of an informative essay.<br>What is wrong with the paragraph?<br><br>To sum up, living at the North Pole would be very cold and uncomfortable. Since very few people live there, there would be very few people to talk to. Also, no one can grow a garden at the North Pole. People who live at the equator also experience problems. Even though Santa Claus lives at the North Pole, there are some problems people living in such a cold climate must face every day. The next time someone wants to complain about where they live, they should consider those people who have to live at the North Pole.