What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?

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Questions below are about the following passage:     An American Hero     (1) In the year 1912, the unsinkable Titanic sank, the United States territory of Arizona became a state, and my Great Uncle Charlie was born. (2) Charlie was born near a small town in Kentucky. (3) On a farm. (4) He grew up learning about the seasons, when to plant the seeds, and when the crops were ripe for picking. (5) His mornings were spent with his hands in dirt as he tended to the growing corps.     (6) When Charlie was only 12, his father died. (7) He had to quit school to take care of his family. (8) While... Show more

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?