What change should be made to sentence 29?

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Johnna’s American history teacher has assigned a research essay on a figure from the American Revolution. Johnna decided to write about Paul Revere and would like your help revising and improving the essay. After you read her essay, answer questions below: (1) In the early 1760s, Paul Revere, ran a busy metalworking shop. (2) People from all over Boston came to buy the silver and gold cups, medals, and cutlery he made. (3) Everything changed in 1765. (4) Many colonists ran low on money and stopped shopping at Paul’s shop. (5) Things got worse when the british passed the Stamp Act. (6) The... Show more

What change should be made to sentence 29?